Wednesday, February 13, 2013

Thursday's lesson

Editing Checklist

“Imaginative response”

1. Sentence length – varied length or deliberately chosen length.

2. Sentence openings – varied openings.

3. Punctuation – used correctly?

4. Have you tried to use something other than commas and full stops?

5. Vocabulary – try to find two or three places where you can use a more effective word – look at verbs particularly.

6. Can you identify clearly what the response says about your neighbourhood? Write a sentence summarizing this. Post this to your blog with the new version of your imaginative response.

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