Homework

Write a paragraph analysing the way the aesthetic features in the first verse and chorus of "Cat's in the Cradle" position the reader. Quote from the lyrics in your paragraph.

Editing checklist

Editing checklist

 

Sentence length – varied length or deliberately chosen length
Sentence openings – varied openings
Punctuation – used correctly and with variety
Have you tried to use something other than commas and full stops?
Vocabulary – try to find two or three places where you can use a more effective word – look at verbs particularly
Use of figurative language - similes, metaphors
Alliteration
Assonance